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i literally printed it out so i can read at any time.. will keep with me.. it was great!!!!
wow...is all i can say!!!!!
this poem is so clear & to the point & shows the spirit you have to overcome all the obstacles.
maybe there could be a seperate section for insightful words/poems.
i don't know about you but when i was on the old tx i would've devoured a book full of these poems.
sandy,ucbgal
WHEN THIS RIBA RAGES
This riba rage
Is gettin' me down
My face is now
Adorned with a frown
The joy that once
Lived inside
Has taken a hiatus
And said goodbye
The positive words
That used to flow
Have said Uh Uh
We've got to go
The sense of confidence
That I once knew
Has packed its bags
And flew the coop too
The warmth that once
Attracted so many
Has turned to ice
It is rather scary
The hallmark of my life
Has always been my heart
But it too has taken flight
And fallen apart
Being aware
Of all these things
Makes my heart cry
And not want to sing
But even with
All of this going on
I seem to find hope
In the Book of John
So even though I whine
And cry a few lines
I never give up
It's not my style
I get into the ring
I fight my best fight
For the opportunity
To live my best life
Like Bozo The Clown
I won't stay down
I persevere
My feet on the ground
I'll win this fight
Like many before
With eyes sparkling
I come through the door
The door of healing
That I walk through
Wearing a wide smile
From here in Brooklyn to Timbuktu
So when the riba rages
And I want to scream
I must remember
This is part of the deal
There's nothing that's perfect
There's a flaw in everything
These wisdoms I've learned
On my dramatic journey
So these words
Are for me and for you
My warrior soldiers
We'll make it through.
Have a great day!
© 2014 DAJenkins aka ThePoet
i literally printed it out so i can read at any time.. will keep with me.. it was great!!!!
-- Edited by TazKat on Monday 21st of July 2014 09:58:38 PM
wow...is all i can say!!!!!
this poem is so clear & to the point & shows the spirit you have to overcome all the obstacles.
maybe there could be a seperate section for insightful words/poems.
i don't know about you but when i was on the old tx i would've devoured a book full of these poems.
sandy,ucbgal
WHEN THIS RIBA RAGES
This riba rage
Is gettin' me down
My face is now
Adorned with a frown
The joy that once
Lived inside
Has taken a hiatus
And said goodbye
The positive words
That used to flow
Have said Uh Uh
We've got to go
The sense of confidence
That I once knew
Has packed its bags
And flew the coop too
The warmth that once
Attracted so many
Has turned to ice
It is rather scary
The hallmark of my life
Has always been my heart
But it too has taken flight
And fallen apart
Being aware
Of all these things
Makes my heart cry
And not want to sing
But even with
All of this going on
I seem to find hope
In the Book of John
So even though I whine
And cry a few lines
I never give up
It's not my style
I get into the ring
I fight my best fight
For the opportunity
To live my best life
Like Bozo The Clown
I won't stay down
I persevere
My feet on the ground
I'll win this fight
Like many before
With eyes sparkling
I come through the door
The door of healing
That I walk through
Wearing a wide smile
From here in Brooklyn to Timbuktu
So when the riba rages
And I want to scream
I must remember
This is part of the deal
There's nothing that's perfect
There's a flaw in everything
These wisdoms I've learned
On my dramatic journey
So these words
Are for me and for you
My warrior soldiers
We'll make it through.
Have a great day!
© 2014 DAJenkins aka ThePoet
-- Edited by thepoet on Monday 21st of July 2014 07:02:07 PM